fucking haunting with that regular metallic scraping on top of the low guitar. below dystopian.

good ambient pad. nice slight flanging and a slightly granular feel to it. sounds like something from a jungle sample pack. clip it hard and heavy - AND STICK A BITCRUSHED AND RESAMPLED AMEN ON IT.

you should stick the first couple of parts into a horror game as the ambience the louder parts as a chase scene. would like a few more layers to it, maybe something stereo.

kinda hard to see what's going on here because of the colours and the natural noise associated with the pencils you used, but you made the outlines of two of the characters thicker so that others can tell them apart. the visual distortion induced by the shapes you used confuses me, and i'm not sure if you wanted that.

however, i like the variation in how much you coloured each part - it's halfway between completely messy and glowing. the shapes nicely vary too.

(edit: since you intended the mess, i'll give you an extra half star.)

BELTEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRR!

crunchiest reds i've seen in a long time. fleshy and industrial colouring on the hand. messy lines everywhere.

clouds so thick they look solid and cities so weird they look like an architect's nightmare. really good chaotic shading and nice contrast between the yellow, pink and black.